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Daytime in my Darkness

7 Comments Posted by on February 13, 2011

Its daytime in my darkness
Always surrounding me
A crowd is near
But yet i am lonely

Its only daytime here in my darkness
With only loneliness as company
I listen to the silence
Since no one can hear me

But still its daytime in my darkness
With a sun of black coal
My tears fall in a corner
And my silent cries echo

i am lonely. i was lonely when i wrote it. i still am. i am just plain lonely. i feel i have no true friends and i feel that no one likes me at all. i am lonely. there. enough said i hope.

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7 responses to “Daytime in my Darkness”

  1. jacque February 24, 2011 at 5:47 am

    I’m lonely to surrounded by family and friends… friends? Don’t give up hope. email me if youd like… jacque

    Reply
  2. Caroline February 28, 2011 at 2:25 am

    This is an amazing poem. do you mind if i use it for a project? (All give you all the credit of course)

    Reply
  3. Anonymous April 26, 2011 at 4:47 am

    Don’t lose hope.
    It’s an amazing poem!

    Reply
  4. Anonymous April 26, 2011 at 4:49 am

    btw, what does ‘Sun of Black coal’ mean?

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    • Sean Seepersad April 26, 2011 at 10:30 am

      I’m not the author, so I’m not sure. But if I had to guess, I’d say that unlike the normal sun that provides light and heat, this one is dark and cold, and makes the daytime dark.

      Reply
    • Rashad July 18, 2011 at 6:29 am

      Sun of black coal,
      I’m not sure if i got it write English is not my first language, but i would say that unlike the sun, the coal one gives heat only if you are close, however the sun is always far so you don’t feel its warmth. and the light, just for few seconds before the coal get covered with the ash. and the author used the word black even though the coal is usually black as a sign for darkness, loneliness. it is amazing expression i wish my English is better so i can give you a clearer reply . sorry if that was confusing.

      Best,
      Rashad

      Reply

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